So I wrote this poem in eighth grade and I thought everyone would be delighted to see it so here it is. :)
I lay on my bed,
A pounding in my head.
Drip drop drip drop,
The candle dies, my heart stops.
I stare at the ceiling,
Oh, the secrets I`m concealing.
Drip drop drip drop,
The candle dies, my heart stops.
I`ve seen him before,
And not anymore.
Drip drop drip drop,
The candle dies, my heart stops.
I hold the gun,
It`s almost done.
Drip drop drip drop,
The candle dies, my heart stops.
The bullet sounds,
My heart pounds.
Drip drop drip drop,
The candle dies, his heart stops.
Thursday, April 2, 2009
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That is an interesting and kind of creepy poem. I actually liked it minus the ending...the imagery and sound was good. I could actually imagine and see the candle. Seems like there is a story behind this!
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